change in story idea

i have changed my story idea as the last one was a bit childish and i also didn't have many ides about how i would do the story.

so my new idea is going to be a side story to a story i have started righting at home.

in my comic it will be about tenshi (the girl on the right) and Ike (the boy on the left) day out. the way this story will be interactive is the reader will be able to chose were they go and what they do there for example the 2 choices that the reader will be given for were they can go is to either the park or the festival, then say the reader chooses the festival. the next choice would've bean what they eat eg. noodles or candy.
or if it was the park the options would be weather to fead the ducks or to go on a boat.